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[Diary of William Ostler]

Aww... it's over???

C'mon it has to be longer than that! That was barely anything at all. This had some great potentional for a great story. It would have been alot cooler if you probed into his phyche and fun stuff as the days went on... or at least some other fun drawings and crap. It's like you just said aww fuck it and slapped a "the end" on it. With a little more effort it could've gotten a lot higher score from this reviewer.

And I really don't find this "dark and twisted humor," but it still held my interest very well. Kudos. MAKE 'EM LONGAH. *shakes fist menacingly*

t3h-m4tt responds:

Oh trust me... there'll be more to the next one.

[Pikachu's Had Enough]

Sorry. Just not that appealing.

I suppose it was an okay effort though I guess. Although I did kinda get annoyed with the cliche "MY SPLEEN" joke. ACK. BE A LITTLE MORE ORIGINAL.

But I gotta say that was pretty good for a first cartoon. Keep it up.

Shuko responds:

Yeah, the whole spleen thing IS overdone... but I just couldn't resist. :P Thanks for the review!

[Non-Canonical Joke Minute]

Pretty good.

Okay, let me start off by saying the obvious. BEAUTIFUL ANIMATION. I loved Pepper and Drink's designs. They were just put together so beautifully and well... there's not much I could say that hasn't been said already. It was just awesome. And the ability to rewind and fast-foward scores MAJOR points. But now, I have to be a little bitch and point out some flaws (don't take this personally or anything).

Now looking back at this, the ogre things looked kinda crappy and out of place... I thought the sequence pretty stupid to begin with though. He calls the guy a fat bastard. I mean so what? Haha? What the hell is that? Maybe I'm fuckin' dense and completely missed something but it just seemed pretty lame. I guess it really didn't matter anyway.

As for the "punch line"... well it wasn't laugh out loud funny. It was kinda amusing. I dunno... It was delivered well for what it was. Although I thought Pepper's voice acting was pretty sketchy. I mean, it was SOOOO plain and quiet and BLAH. It really didn't have any feeling. I don't know why this got to me so much but yeah...

Moving on, my main gripe is honestly the length of this thing. Okay, it's eye candy, but other than that this cartoon didn't offer much. I mean just when I sit down to enjoy it BOOM. It's over. I nearly CRIED. I'll admit, it was sorta enjoyable but pretty characters and nice scenery a cartoon doesn't make. There wasn't ANY story involved in this piece at all. A couple of one-liners and OH GUESS WHAT GUYS, CREDITS. From what you had so far this could have been the intro to an AWESOME Flash work but it just ended. You have to admit that you could have done SO much more and so much better with this thing.

Listen, I absolutely LOVE your style and you gotta shitload of talent. If you keep working like this you're gunna make a cartoon to BLOW us all outta the water, but you came pretty short this time (literally). Anyway, nice job and stuff...

touched responds:

Look, I'm *working* on long pieces where the story is very developed. But while I do that, people keep begging for stuff, so I release little things like this in the meantime which don't take too long, This was not intended to have a story at all, just to tell a couple of jokes. Before informing me of my potential, see what else I've already done, not just here but on my sites. And yes, you missed the double entendre between the aliens.